공원가기

Please tell me one of the parks you often go to? Where is it located?

What can you see in the park? Why do you often go there?

I usually go to Sinjung Lake park near my house.

It's only a 15-minute walk from my home.

In the park, there is a huge statue of General Lee Soonsin.

In front of the statue, there is a square so that people usually play badminton.

And on the left side of the square, there is a trail and people take a walk on the trail.

But what I like the most about this park is the Shinjung lake.

Whenever I take a walk along the lakeside, I feel refreshed.

That's the reason why I often go there.

 

주의점

play badminton x play badmin o

my home 앞에 the를 붙여서 말하는 경향이 있는데 the 뒤에 소유격 못 옴 <- 고쳐 말하기

뒤에 호수나 사람에 대한 묘사 내용을 추가해도 좋을 듯 함.

 

 

What activities do you usually do when going to the park? Who do you usually go with? How often do you there?

I usually take a walk in the park. I started to go there to lose weight.

I often went to the park with my mom who loved jogging.

These days, however, I go to the park alone because her knees became bad.

When I was young, I went to the park for three days a week.

Nowadays, however, I go to the park once or twice a month because I'm busy with my study, 

Except for taking a walk, sometimes I go there to watch the movie.

There is a small outside theater in the park. It is a great way to enjoy a free movie.

Before the movie, I go to a convenience store nearby theater and buy some snacks for the movie.

Those are the activities that I usually do in the park.

 

주의점

처음에 말할 때 바로 the main activity I mostly do ~ 로 들어가서 서론이 없었음.

중간에 엄마 얘기로 가다가 딴 길로 새버림. 내가 공원을 가는 이유는 ~ 나와야 되는데 엄마가 나를 데리고 가는 이유는~ 으로 바뀌어 버림. 중간에 새지 말고 세부적인 스토리는 자제하자

시제 왔다갔다 하는 거 조심하기

 

주의점 2

started - 드 발음 하지 않기

lose weight - 루즈에 강세 주기

three times in a week, once in a week

At first 보다는 used to 표현이 더 자연스러움

걷는 얘기 위주로 하다가 갑자기 영화보러 간다? - 내용 구성이 좀 어색함. 후에 올 문장 연결을 생각해서 이야기 진행하기

활동 목록이 부족 - 걷는 거, 영화보는 거 또 뭐 있을까?

take a walk를 한다고 하면 얼마나 걷는지 어디 코스를 도는지 등등 관련된 정보도 있으면 좋을 듯

왜 횟수가 줄었는지 이유도 달면 좋을 듯 - I'm busy with my work 등

 

주의점 3

과거-현재 비교보다는 액티비티 중심으로 서술하는 것이 문제의 의도와 적합

메인 액티비티를 더 서술할 필요가 있음. 영화보기 전 편의점 가서 뭘 사갖고 온다던지

 

공원에서 하는 것

- take a walk (go for a walk)

- sit on the bench and get some fresh air

- play badmin

 

쓸 만한 표현

- every other day (하루 걸러 하루, 격일마다)

- The main activity I mostly do~

 

 

Please tell me about something memorable that has happened in a park.

The most memorable thing that I've had was meeting my old teacher about 5 years ago.

While I was playing badmin with my sister, I saw a woman who looked like my homeroom teacher in elementary school.

She was my best teacher in life. But she was in school for only 1 year and transferred to another city.

But I didn't think that I have to get her number at that time. So I had no way to contact her.

As soon as I saw her, I greeted her. But It seems that she didn't recognize me at eye.

I fully understood her. She had met so many students for her teaching life.

Anyway, It was nice to meet her.

 

어휘

as usual 평상시처럼

The most memorable experience I've had

While I was waking 과거 진행형

I lost contact with him after transferred to another school

It seemed like she recognized me at eye (한눈에)

keep in touch with

 

주의점

play badminton 에 강세

unfortunately 발음 시 't' 생략

transferred to another school

But I didn't think that I have to get her number at that time 이거 표현 이상함 너무 어렵다

 -> Back then, I never thought how I could I know her number ~

I greeted to her -> I said hi

It didn't seemed ~ 그리고 부정형태에서 더 강조해서 발음하기 의미전달을 하기 위해

플로우에 맞게 내용 구성하기

- 만나서 무슨 얘기를 했다 아니면 너무 반가워서 연락처를 주고받았다 또는 밥을 사드렸다 등

  추가해야 할 내용이 있음 너무 뚝 끊기는 느낌

 

항상 지적 당하는 사항

단어를 너무 어려운 것을 쓰지 말라

내용을 쉽게 해라

딱 떠오르는 단어 말할 수 있는 단어들로만 스크립트를 짜라

말을 하기 위해서 사전 찾는 일이 필요 없어야 한다